Sunday, May 8, 2011

Exercise 4: Photo Sequence (Attempt 1 )

We come to a park...focus on green field...

Baseball field is shown...describe dirt and weather conditions...

Cut to Vinny walking, should incorporate fields and greenery...

Focus on Vinny's shorts...emphasize walking on branches and leaves...crackling sounds...


Continue with walking narration...



Cut to scene of walkway path...

Focus on Vinny looking down path...

Tree obstacle focused. Discuss obstacles in life and the correlation.

Focus on Vinny's face wandering into the stream. Discuss thought process...

Focus on VJ shot....waking up Vinny and shaking him!...

Tree shot...Vinny asks for a hug...

VJ showing his manly self...gives him a tree to hug instead of a hug...a play on the term...tree hugger....

Focus on 9/11 memorial and discuss the epiphany that strikes the friends...


End with final words of wisdom. Thought process and epiphany are further discussed...

Exercise 6 (Attempt 1 )